diophantusdan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[5 Busy Shapes]

yeah uhhh...

Actually, those are cubes, not squares -.o

Dustball responds:

You're smart. They're spheres, not circles too, but it's for little kids.

[Mecha-Death: Pilot]

awesome animation

One of the best animated pieces I've ever seen on flash. Awesome idea for a series too.

[MySpace]

bad animation

Im sorry but It was just badly animated. Believe it or not people walk, they dont slide accross the floor. People also have hands. The graphics werent very good either. Try using some gradients, shading techniques. I would visit the tutorial section if I were you and watch the walking animations/lip synching/and graphics tutorials. It will definatly help you improve. Its probably as good as my first submission which passed with a 1.8. But my second one (which I'm working on now)has vastly improved graphics animation and everything due to feedback from reviews. Take what people tell you and try and improve with it. It will make everyone happy. Oh and I gave it a 7 for humor cuz it was funny.